Friday, June 18, 2021
Lawyer paragraph
This week, in manawanui we wrote a lawyer paragraph. I wrote about why we should do mixing it up every second week. I liked using wte as it gave me feedback on what I needed to improve on. My next step would be to make my sentences longer.
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hey Leiah! I read your writing and is very persuasive. Well done on 100% fast feedback.
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